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1Osada Ninak 

Osada Ninak

Sat Oct 19, 2013 12:13 pm
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2Osada Ninak 

Osada Ninak

Mon Oct 21, 2013 8:09 am
Bump for lookoing at

3Osada Ninak 

Osada Ninak

Fri Oct 25, 2013 5:56 am
Bump Senior

4Ashland Irisaki 

Ashland Irisaki
12th Division Captain

Fri Oct 25, 2013 3:58 pm
Alright So the basic spells are approved however lets look over your primera
The plus one to speed translates to plus one to movement. Also using your claws as swords is also fine. Lets go over the techniques.
Jesters Laughing Dance~ Denied. This is clearly combining movement and sword. And its at grand-master level. Your plus one to speed does not give you a plus one in sword. And considering that your speed is only a plus 4 normally. the max speed move you can have is at a 5 tier. and the max sword move you can have is at an 8 tier. if you make a combination technique involving fast movement and sword play then because of you movement being a 5 tier the move must be a five tier.

Deaths Grinning Reaper~ I suggest just adding this to your passive ability as an addition to your claws. Also you don't need to define the damage. Our damage tier system does that based on who your fighting and what they are capable of.

Insane Finger Boom Party popper~ This is obviously offensive magic. Meaning your asking for it at an 8 tier and you only know 4 tier.

Jack the Jester ~Same thing again. This is obviously defensive magic. your again asking for it at an 8 tier and you only have a 4 tier. Also the spell can not block any attack. We have a tier system for that.

5Osada Ninak 

Osada Ninak

Fri Oct 25, 2013 4:43 pm
Is there a way to get the Deaths grinning reaper approved..like what do i have to nerf and the same wit hthe other two

6Ashland Irisaki 

Ashland Irisaki
12th Division Captain

Sun Oct 27, 2013 2:18 am
Take it off your technique list and an put that you have a scythe as a passive with your claws. If you want to boomerang it then mark that as one of your techniques.
As for the other three they need to be moved off of master as they are offensive and defensive spells or movement included. And you have nothing higher then a 4 in any of those.

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